Longer Than 55 Fiction!!!
September 19, 2009
It is a story of a young guy who always used to wish he was a fly, so he could buzz around and go in people's houses and listen to what they are saying. He always used to pray, " I wish I could be a fly and listen to people talking", and then he would spend hours thinking, what it would be like to be a fly.
One night he had a dream that he was a fly and buzzing around he came upon this house that belonged to his beautiful teenage crush. A girl, he always wanted to be with. He thought to himself, "I should go into that girl's house first and listen to her conversations", but neither the door nor the windows were open. Then he thought, " May be I will just ring the bell and when she will open the door, I will buzz into her house and land on the wall to listen to all her conversations", but to his dismay, flies are not strong enough to ring the bell.
He decided to wait until she opens the door or the window herself. Then finally the door opened, and he buzzed in real quick and landed on the wall admiring the girl and her beauty. After sometime the phone rang and the girl picked it up and started a conversation. He flew and sat on a spiraled kinda thing, which smelled pretty good to him. He was so excited that he could finally sit so close to her and hear her talk. But when the girl started the conversation, he could not understand a word. He saw another fly who had also leaned on a long, spiraled thing and asked, " How come I can not understand what she is saying? "The other fly replied, " That's coz flies can not understand English as they speak Flynese.
The guy got so pissed and said, "This really sucks!!! I do not want to be a fly anymore and I am getting out of here", but when he went to buzz off, he could not move. "Argh! I can not move, it feels like my feet is glued to this long spiraled thing. Can you gime a hand", he said to the other fly.
"I can not move either, my feet are also stuck" said the other fly. He looked around and said to himself, " I wish, I had never wished that I was a fly, I want to be a human again". He was so scared that finally he woke up and it took him a minute to realize that he is still a human. He went to his balcony and saw his crush standing there, smiling :) and he realized how lucky he is to get his identity back and decided to try his best to get the girl !!!
P.S. - In the recent best seller " The secret" it is stated that, 'we do not always want what we ask for all our lives' and with this weird story, I just wanted to convey that it's a great feeling to be yourself as grass is not always greener on the other side and we can achieve a lot with the way we are even if we lack certain qualities, also we can not realize how lucky we are until and unless we experience the problems that others face :) ... Hope you enjoyed :)
Cheers!!!
One night he had a dream that he was a fly and buzzing around he came upon this house that belonged to his beautiful teenage crush. A girl, he always wanted to be with. He thought to himself, "I should go into that girl's house first and listen to her conversations", but neither the door nor the windows were open. Then he thought, " May be I will just ring the bell and when she will open the door, I will buzz into her house and land on the wall to listen to all her conversations", but to his dismay, flies are not strong enough to ring the bell.
He decided to wait until she opens the door or the window herself. Then finally the door opened, and he buzzed in real quick and landed on the wall admiring the girl and her beauty. After sometime the phone rang and the girl picked it up and started a conversation. He flew and sat on a spiraled kinda thing, which smelled pretty good to him. He was so excited that he could finally sit so close to her and hear her talk. But when the girl started the conversation, he could not understand a word. He saw another fly who had also leaned on a long, spiraled thing and asked, " How come I can not understand what she is saying? "The other fly replied, " That's coz flies can not understand English as they speak Flynese.
The guy got so pissed and said, "This really sucks!!! I do not want to be a fly anymore and I am getting out of here", but when he went to buzz off, he could not move. "Argh! I can not move, it feels like my feet is glued to this long spiraled thing. Can you gime a hand", he said to the other fly.
"I can not move either, my feet are also stuck" said the other fly. He looked around and said to himself, " I wish, I had never wished that I was a fly, I want to be a human again". He was so scared that finally he woke up and it took him a minute to realize that he is still a human. He went to his balcony and saw his crush standing there, smiling :) and he realized how lucky he is to get his identity back and decided to try his best to get the girl !!!
P.S. - In the recent best seller " The secret" it is stated that, 'we do not always want what we ask for all our lives' and with this weird story, I just wanted to convey that it's a great feeling to be yourself as grass is not always greener on the other side and we can achieve a lot with the way we are even if we lack certain qualities, also we can not realize how lucky we are until and unless we experience the problems that others face :) ... Hope you enjoyed :)
Cheers!!!
September 19, 2009 7:13 AM
long time here and the wait was worth it...:)....beautiful thought provoking post...."I just wanted to convey that it's a great feeling to be yourself as grass is not always greener on the other side and we can not realize how lucky we are until and unless we experience the problems that others face".....says it all...:)
September 19, 2009 7:24 AM
Nice post! :)
And nice message! :)
September 19, 2009 7:32 AM
Thank you so much for appreciating Kaka and Anu :) .... m glad u guys like it :)
take care :)
September 19, 2009 7:50 AM
a good message !!
Nice Post...I like Ur writing style
September 19, 2009 8:01 AM
Nice post... :)
Accepting yourself in integrity is talisman of happy life..... :)
Really loved the story..
Cheers!!
September 19, 2009 8:13 AM
Very nice fiction suga. I liked it a lot! I have heard (read ) about this book secret from sid. I have the book on my shelf but never read it! Now I will read it as it inspired this nice fiction!! :-)
September 19, 2009 8:21 AM
oh wow..!!
Its truly beautiful..
The msg u wanna convey is really gud :)
Takecare
Keep smiling :)
September 19, 2009 8:31 AM
A great message conveyed through a much simpler post, very nice attempt..I remember one of my senior colleague once told "It is better to be yourself, becuse it is much more difficult to be different person at different times"
September 19, 2009 8:34 AM
Nice story!
If God had wanted me otherwise, He would have created me otherwise. One should remember that!
September 19, 2009 8:52 AM
@ Anil : thanks so much :)
@ Amit : very well said :)
@ Pra : Try n read the book ... its very inspiring :)
September 19, 2009 8:54 AM
@ Satyu : thanksy :)
@ Mustaf : true indeed :)
@ Sophie : great lines ... loved 'em :)
September 19, 2009 9:14 AM
awesome story there Sugandha. Good read!
Write more! write more..
September 19, 2009 9:14 AM
good to see another Secret fan....
just FYI to anyone reading here, secret works... I have implemented it and it works lovely...
Btw interesting thing to share through the form of Fiction...liked it...superb!!!
September 19, 2009 9:22 AM
@ Rohini : Hey hie again :)
m glad u like it :)
take care n keep smiling :)
@ Sid : u r The Secret's fan ... cool man ... gimme a Hi5 :)
September 19, 2009 9:47 AM
oye.. collect sm laurels 4m my page n complte ur tag soon woman
September 19, 2009 9:55 AM
@ Sobhit : hey the tag is in my drafts ... bt its so like tht 8 things sorta tag ... so i decided to do it later on ... btw r u on facebook?? if yes thn add me :)
September 19, 2009 12:18 PM
Hey suga, u rmmbr once u hd a postd a childhood poem nd i cmmntd tht i was surprisd at the innocence of d poem till read in d end tht u penned it way back!
Hmmm.. sumthing similar happend with this story bt here d end was diffrnt :p
September 19, 2009 12:25 PM
@ Vipul : hmmm I guess m still a kid :P
September 19, 2009 1:55 PM
it's truly beautiful! with a great message of course :)
September 19, 2009 3:38 PM
that was something brilliant...
incidentally I too have read the book and you will see it my next post...and I must say that was a great comeback....
"you have a creative mind."
gimme a hi5....
September 19, 2009 4:59 PM
"be careful what u wish for coz u jus might get it all"
a line from the chris daughtry song home.. nice 1..
September 19, 2009 9:54 PM
FLYNESE !!! LOL... wonderful read, short n sweet.
September 19, 2009 9:55 PM
I agree.. Grass is not always greener on the other side :)
September 19, 2009 10:29 PM
@ Americanising : Thanksy :)
@ RSV : Hi5 :)
@ Vishnu : thanksy :)
September 19, 2009 10:29 PM
@ Nitin : hehe .... Hi5 mannn yeah :)
September 20, 2009 12:09 AM
Lovely story. Its great to be ourselves:)
September 20, 2009 1:20 AM
that was really good Suga.. had a deep meaning.. great! :)
you know what.. I wish I could understand Mosquitese.. so that I could listen to their strategy and hunt them accordingly.. :P
September 20, 2009 1:31 AM
Great one! Loved the message... it was put in a fantastic way in the story! :D
September 20, 2009 2:14 AM
Hey Suga.. acha tha :) Flynese.. haha!
Ya.. its true we are not satisfied with what we are n just end up being what we shouldnt be! Nice message.
Happy writing :)
September 20, 2009 3:46 AM
thats a nice way to put across the msg! :)
September 20, 2009 4:07 AM
@ Ekam : thanksy :)
@ Saad :P .... MBA is giving u weird thoughts :P ... imagine ... listenin to mosquitoes all the tym ewww ... no peace :P ... such a headache
September 20, 2009 4:08 AM
@ rosh, Priyanka and Sawan : thanksy :)
September 20, 2009 5:52 AM
trie bein gal!liked it :)
September 20, 2009 7:48 AM
thanks so much what an inspiring post. Just found your blog and will be back soon. xx
September 20, 2009 10:28 AM
Excellent story. I loved it. Have you seen a movie called Bedazzled? Your story reminded me of that movie. You said such a great truth in a simple story. Hats off.
September 20, 2009 10:51 AM
@ Amrita : hey thanks ... m glad u liked it :)
@ Emma : Hey welcum to my blog Emma ...n thanks so much ... du visit again :)
September 20, 2009 10:52 AM
@ Bharathi : Hey thanks so much ... I havnt seen the movie yet ... shall download it soon :)
take care :)
September 20, 2009 1:25 PM
Hey u brought out some nice facts in this post yaar :)
"We can not realize how lucky we are until and unless we experience the problems that others face"
The aforesaid point is really true bot we often overlook it...
This is my first visit to ur blog & am already impressed :)
U have a new follower :)
keep blogging :)
cheers!!!!
September 20, 2009 2:53 PM
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September 20, 2009 4:54 PM
That's a great story ! The message behind it is very true aswel. Sometimes our lifes aren't as bad as we seem to think !
Good stuff.
w/b x
September 20, 2009 8:48 PM
Cute ! Bell Ringing Stuff!
September 20, 2009 9:29 PM
@Satish : Thanks so much :)
and welcum to my blog :)
take care !!!
Pra : cumin :)
@ Steve : Hey god to c u in my blog after so long ... thanks for appreciation :)
@ Push : Thanksy :)
September 20, 2009 9:29 PM
@Satish : Thanks so much :)
and welcum to my blog :)
take care !!!
Pra : cumin :)
@ Steve : Hey god to c u in my blog after so long ... thanks for appreciation :)
@ Push : Thanksy :)
September 20, 2009 10:09 PM
hey its not at all like d 8 tag things... dat ws 8 dis is 9... n so diff in content 2... baki if u wana categorize den toh all tags r d same :P :P....so tk it put f d draft n let it b on ur page...aftr8.... 9 desrves 2b out here.. :D.. n ya am on facebook ... drop me ur profile link... or rathr here's mine...
http://www.facebook.com/home.php?ref=home#/profile.php?id=689015575&ref=profile
searchin ppl on facebook can b a task 4me :P... n ya d no 9 alwaz cmes aftr 8 b get it outta ur drafts... cya :D
September 20, 2009 10:21 PM
@ Sobhit : yes boss ... I will work as per ur orders ;P ... nxt to nxt post is definitely .... 9 tag ... added ya on fb ...
cya there :)
take care :)
September 20, 2009 10:31 PM
TItle -longer than 55 fiction/??? why such a title?? I first thought it might be 56 fiction....
a very nice post... Be happy with what u r and what u have.... a nice message...
September 20, 2009 11:21 PM
@ Shankar :lol ... haha ... arey i have a whole long story about the title ... I thought I will try n write it as 55 fiction ... bt as alwaz I suck at 55 fiction ... It became a whole long story ... thus the title :P
September 21, 2009 12:39 AM
There goes my lifelong dream of becoming a bee, buzzing and stinging all day long.
Seriously though: I really, really liked this post! Thanks for following me; I'll be back for more :)
September 21, 2009 2:16 AM
hmm thats a new one - longer than 55 fiction :) he he and boy i sure dont want to be a fly at least:) maybe a dinosaur :)!! anyways nice one..and yes..wat yu are is 100 times better than yur fantasy!! yu came up well!! and hey long time no see?? ...tak care..and i did send yu a request on FB... cya
HaRy
September 21, 2009 2:21 AM
Rhonda Bryne's Law of Attraction conveyed fully...but .....
September 21, 2009 2:24 AM
@ Lady : haha ... awww ... hehe ... welcum to my blog ... nd ur blog is beautiful :)
September 21, 2009 2:27 AM
@ harry : haha ... Dinosaur ... I dunt thnk so ... bad idea ... the girl will get scared ... ehehe :P ....was jus busy wid wrk n all so cudnt get the chance to read n write blog.... n I didnt receive ne friend request frm ur side ;-O :(
September 21, 2009 2:47 AM
@ learner : lol .. its nowhere related t the secret :P .... tht was jus a line ... the book is super huge man ...
September 21, 2009 10:59 AM
thats what "but...." is for... ;))
September 21, 2009 11:17 AM
@ Learner : hmm :)
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September 21, 2009 11:29 AM
Nice ,
A great message brought out beautifully :)
arnav
September 21, 2009 12:01 PM
@ blogger : Hey Thanks so much for appreciation and invite ... m glad n honoured :)
I really apologize ... but i wont be able to join the site coz of my busy schedule ... Thanks so much but :)
happy blogging :)
September 21, 2009 12:14 PM
Thank God I was a human .. I really thanked God ... phew, I keep killing flies every now and thn !
P.S. Who cares to dream, when already I have a much better life and a really beautiful love of my life ! :)
Sweet post Suga !
September 21, 2009 12:19 PM
@ Arnav : Thank u so much :)
September 21, 2009 12:20 PM
@ Sourav : hehe ... nice ... n Thank so much ... may god bless ya n the beautiful love of ur life ...
cheers !!!
September 21, 2009 12:20 PM
@ Sourav : hehe ... nice ... n Thank so much ... may god bless ya n the beautiful love of ur life ...
cheers !!!
September 21, 2009 12:24 PM
Super creativity and super message in the post.
I used to wish I am a superman. Now I dont :P
September 21, 2009 12:32 PM
@ aditya : awww this post took ur superman dream .... :P ... didnt mean it to be like tht :P ...... sadness :(
September 22, 2009 12:04 AM
Nice post dear, loved ur blog :)
n Thanks a lot for dropping by my side :)
September 22, 2009 5:34 AM
wow!
we should not lose the things we possess for achieving our goal,but to achieve our goal,we need to lose some of those things!no way out!:)
September 22, 2009 7:03 AM
Nice!
Love this post..
September 22, 2009 9:15 AM
hi suga...
it is indeed Sensible and sublime...
I will wrap you post into one word...PERCEPTION.(may be relative and rational)
I would like to read if you write the same topic with social elements being fabricated. :) :) :)
September 22, 2009 12:05 PM
Extremely well written and what imagination. I also got stuck to your post.
September 23, 2009 8:06 PM
well A great message narrated beautifully........
Loved the message
September 25, 2009 2:06 AM
That was a beautiful one!
Nice expressionism.
Loved it!
October 1, 2009 3:13 AM
That was a great read! Yes! Grass is not always greener on the other side :)
We should live our lives to the fullest, without whining and complaining... and count our blessings! Life is a high!
October 1, 2009 3:22 AM
... also Shubho Bijoya!
October 22, 2009 5:26 AM
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November 18, 2009 7:34 AM
haha, grass is never green on either sides :P..lol !
Totally adorable work, if i had a wish i would want to be a ferrari and speed aroung all day :P lol j/k
But i dont have one wish and i ll have work my butt off to just buy one and not be one :P
Cheers
November 22, 2009 6:16 AM
It was extremely interesting for me to read that article. Thanx for it. I like such themes and everything that is connected to them. I would like to read more on that blog soon.
December 7, 2009 3:56 AM
whoa.so great.. in our country there are cases of child molestation and abuses..its pretty hard for the youngsters..>_< really..I couldn't even imagine how painful they been through
January 22, 2010 11:29 PM
Keep on posting such themes. I like to read stories like that. Just add some pics :)
February 1, 2010 8:33 AM
Nice post. We are better off as what we are for there's just one of us -- unique with all the goods and bad.
Flynese ? :-)
Not a big secret fan ; borrowed it for a bit and had to put it down in 30 minutes...
March 15, 2010 7:44 AM
That's a post with great lessons. Thanks for sharing.